Draft Diagnostic
You’ve started your novel — maybe even written half of it — but something feels off. The tension’s sagging. Your character arc is fuzzy. You’re not sure if the story still works… or if it ever did.
The Draft Diagnostic is your personal story check-in — a focused editorial service for writers in progress who need insight, encouragement, and a way forward. This is not a full manuscript assessment. It’s a targeted deep dive designed to help you regain clarity and momentum.
Who This Is For
You’ve written 25% to 75% of your novel and feel stuck, uncertain, or overwhelmed
You keep writing… and deleting
You’re not sure if the plot is holding or the character arc is working
You’re dreading a full restart, but you know something isn’t right
What I Review
What’s Working: Strengths in voice, concept, or pacing
What’s Not: Story tangles, dropped threads, confusing beats
Structure Clarity: Is the midpoint solid? Are we building tension toward the climax?
Character Arcs: Are goals clear? Are emotional changes unfolding believably?
Next Steps: What to revise, what to cut, and what to keep leaning into
What You Get
A 3 – 5 page diagnostic memo with:
Insights into what’s working (so you don’t scrap too much)
Identification of core issues derailing the story
A step-by-step strategy to get back on track
A custom “Revive Your Draft” checklist to refocus your goals and next scenes
Optional add-ons:
30-minute feedback call
Inline margin comments on selected pages
What to Submit
20K – 30K words of your current draft (choose the first third or a meaningful segment)
A short story summary or outline-in-progress
Optional: A note describing where you feel stuck or confused
Turnaround
2 - 4 weeks from the date materials are received.
Pricing
$299
How to Book
Click the “Book My Draft Diagnostic now” button below
Fill out a brief intake form + upload your materials
Receive confirmation + delivery date
Feedback arrives with actionable insights and a renewed sense of direction