VIP 5-Day Feedback

On a tight deadline? Have an agent waiting? Entering a contest? Or maybe you just can’t wait weeks for feedback on your story.

VIP 5-Day Feedback is a premium editorial service that delivers strategic, high-impact insight on your manuscript within five business days — without sacrificing depth or quality.

You’ll walk away with a clear sense of what’s working, what’s not, and exactly how to move forward — all on a tight timeline.

Who This Is For

  • Have a submission deadline or fast-approaching opportunity

  • Need strategic guidance on a partial or full manuscript quickly

  • Want big-picture, expert feedback in days — not weeks

  • Feel stuck and want a professional perspective ASAP

What I Review

High-Level Structure: Story arc, pacing, act transitions, tension

Character & Motivation: Are character goals clear? Do arcs evolve naturally?

Voice & Engagement: Is the writing style strong and appropriate for your audience/genre?

Plot Cohesion: Are there logic gaps or plot tangles?

Next Steps: Focused revision priorities tailored to your goals

What You Get

  • A 2 – 4 page editorial letter, covering:

    • Strengths, weaknesses, and red flags

    • Actionable revision guidance

    • A professional perspective on next steps

  • Optional add-ons:

    • 30-minute feedback call

    • Inline margin comments on selected pages

What to Submit

  1. Your manuscript (preferred max: 70K words for optimal depth)

  2. Brief story summary or author note (genre, goals, concerns)

  3. Optional: Note any key scenes you'd like reviewed in-depth

For manuscripts over 70K words: Feedback will focus on high-priority areas unless otherwise arranged. Projects over 70K words may require an additional fee or approval.

Turnaround

5 business days from the date materials are received.

VIP slots are limited to 2 – 3 per month — book early to reserve your spot.

Pricing

$399 - $799, depending on submission length and complexity. You’ll select your tier when booking.

How to Book

  1. Click the “Book Now” button below

  2. Fill out a brief intake form + upload your materials

  3. Receive confirmation + delivery date

  4. Feedback arrives with actionable insights and a renewed sense of direction