Manuscript Evaluation

You’ve written “The End.” Now it’s time to figure out what’s next.

You’ve finished your draft — a huge accomplishment. But before you revise, query, or self-publish, you need to know:

“Is my story actually working?”

“What needs to change… and what doesn’t?”

“Where do I even start revising?”

“Am I actually ready to query or self-publish?”

The Manuscript Evaluation is a professional, big-picture editorial service that gives you clear answers to those questions. You’ll get honest, strategic feedback on your story’s structure, pacing, characters, and more — with guidance on how to revise with purpose, not guesswork.

Who This Is For

  • You’ve completed a full draft (up to100K words)

  • You’re preparing to revise, query, or hire a developmental editor

  • You’re feeling overwhelmed by your draft and need clarity and direction

  • You’re seeking an outside perspective from a professional who understands structure, character, and reader expectations

What I Review

Structure & Pacing: Does the story arc build effectively? Do scenes escalate and resolve?

Character Development: Are characters complex, motivated, and evolving over time?

Voice & Tone: Is the voice engaging? Is the tone consistent and appropriate for genre?

Plot Cohesion: Are there logic gaps or unresolved threads? Do subplots support the main story?

Tension & Stakes: Are the stakes clear, personal, and increasing?

Theme & Resonance: Is there an emotional or thematic throughline that brings depth?

What You Get

  • A 6 – 10 page editorial letter covering:

    • What’s working / Strengths in your story’s concept and execution

    • Key problems to address and why they matter

    • Clear suggestions on where to focus during revision

  • Optional add-ons:

    • 30-minute feedback call

    • Inline margin comments on selected pages

What to Submit

  1. Your full manuscript (in Word or Google Docs, double-spaced)

  2. Optional: a brief author note about your goals, genre, or concerns

  3. Optional: story outline or synopsis (if you have one — helpful but not required)

Turnaround

4 - 6 weeks from the date materials are received.

Need it faster? Check out the VIP 5-Day Feedback option instead.

Pricing

$449 - $649, depending on submission length and complexity. You’ll select your tier when booking.

How to Book

  1. Click the “Book My Manuscript Evaluation Now” button below

  2. Fill out a brief intake form + upload your materials

  3. Receive confirmation + delivery date

  4. Receive your editorial letter within 4 - 6 weeks — and a roadmap for your revision