First Chapter Critique
You send the first chapter of your novel (up to 4,000 words), and I assess whether it’s truly working as your story’s hook.
I evaluate:
Reader engagement and clarity
Character introduction and voice
Worldbuilding and scene flow
You’ll receive a 1–2 page critique plus margin comments that show where you’re grabbing attention — and where you might be losing it.
You send the first chapter of your novel (up to 4,000 words), and I assess whether it’s truly working as your story’s hook.
I evaluate:
Reader engagement and clarity
Character introduction and voice
Worldbuilding and scene flow
You’ll receive a 1–2 page critique plus margin comments that show where you’re grabbing attention — and where you might be losing it.
You send the first chapter of your novel (up to 4,000 words), and I assess whether it’s truly working as your story’s hook.
I evaluate:
Reader engagement and clarity
Character introduction and voice
Worldbuilding and scene flow
You’ll receive a 1–2 page critique plus margin comments that show where you’re grabbing attention — and where you might be losing it.