Inline Margin Comment Up to 15 pages
Margin comments will be distributed across selected scenes and chapters — usually spaced throughout your manuscript — to:
Illustrate recurring craft issues (e.g., head-hopping, weak transitions, pacing)
Highlight effective moments (so you can replicate what works)
Support the broader feedback shared in your editorial letter
If you have specific sections you’d like me to focus on (e.g., your opening, midpoint, or climax), you can request that in your intake form.
Margin comments will be distributed across selected scenes and chapters — usually spaced throughout your manuscript — to:
Illustrate recurring craft issues (e.g., head-hopping, weak transitions, pacing)
Highlight effective moments (so you can replicate what works)
Support the broader feedback shared in your editorial letter
If you have specific sections you’d like me to focus on (e.g., your opening, midpoint, or climax), you can request that in your intake form.
Margin comments will be distributed across selected scenes and chapters — usually spaced throughout your manuscript — to:
Illustrate recurring craft issues (e.g., head-hopping, weak transitions, pacing)
Highlight effective moments (so you can replicate what works)
Support the broader feedback shared in your editorial letter
If you have specific sections you’d like me to focus on (e.g., your opening, midpoint, or climax), you can request that in your intake form.