First Chapter Critique

Hook your readers. Impress agents. Set the tone right.

Your first chapter is your novel’s audition. It decides whether a reader keeps going… or closes the book.

The First Chapter Critique is a focused editorial service designed to help you polish your opening pages so they grab attention, spark curiosity, and signal that your story is worth the ride.

Whether you're submitting to agents, entering a contest, or preparing to self-publish, this is your chance to make that all-important first impression unforgettable.

Who This Is For

  • You’re preparing to query agents or pitch to editors

  • You’re not sure if your opening scene is working

  • You want to test out your voice, pacing, or premise before diving into a full draft or revision

  • You’re publishing and want to ensure your readers turn the page

What I Review

Opening Hook: Does it immediately capture attention and curiosity?

Tone & Voice: Is the narrative voice distinct, confident, and aligned with your genre?

Character Introduction: Do we care about or feel intrigued by your main character quickly?

Clarity & Flow: Are we grounded in the scene? Is it easy to follow and emotionally engaging?

Market Fit: Is the chapter strong enough to compete in today’s publishing landscape?

What You Get

  • A 1 – 2 page editorial letter with:

    • Strengths and standout moments

    • Suggested revisions or cuts

    • Clear action steps to refine your opening

  • Margin comments (Google Docs) highlighting:

    • Areas of confusion or friction

    • Moments that land powerfully (so you can build on them)

    • Questions a reader or agent might have

What to Submit

  1. Your first chapter, up to 4,000 words

  2. Optional: A brief author note or story blurb

Turnaround

2 - 3 weeks from the date materials are received.

Pricing

$125

How to Book

  1. Click the “Book Now” button below

  2. Upload your first chapter + optional notes

  3. Choose your add-ons (if any)

  4. Receive expert, actionable feedback within days