Get Your Submission Package Agent-Ready
Because good books still get rejected by weak submission packages.
Your submission package needs to impress fast.
This submission package critique gives you expert feedback on your query letter, synopsis, and the opening pages of your manuscript—the same materials agents evaluate when deciding whether to make a full request.
If you’re preparing to query and want a full query package review, this service helps ensure every piece supports your pitch.
$499 One-time payment.
Includes your full submission package: query letter, synopsis, and first 10 pages.
No hidden fees. 3-4 weeks turnaround.Why your submission deserves a second set of expert eyes.
✅ Stand out in the agent slush pile in 15 seconds or less.
✅ Tighten your hook, stakes, and genre signal.
✅ Fix red flags before agents spot them.
✅ Get direct, line-level feedback.
What’s Included with Your Submission Package Critique?
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Synopsis
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First Pages
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Editorial letter
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Full Request Spark
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Query . Synopsis . First Pages . Editorial letter . Full Request Spark .
It’s a full submission materials review, focused on line-level craft, story cohesion, and agent-facing strategy. It’s designed to help you avoid rejections that come from weak submission materials.
In-Document Comments
You’ll receive margin notes directly in your query, synopsis, and first 10 pages.
✅ Highlights on what’s working and where you’re losing agent interest.
✅ Notes on tension, pacing, and voice.
✅ Suggestions to fix line-level issues without flattering your style.
✅ Commentary that reflects how agents actually read your submission materials.
1-2 Page Editorial Letter
A 1-2 page summary of your critique that includes:
✅ A breakdown of your submission strengths and gaps.
✅ Strategic insight on how the pieces are (or aren’t) working together.
✅ A clear set of next steps to guide your revision.
Full Submission Review Scope
You’ll receive a clear editorial letter that helps you revise with purpose and strengthen your query package before submitting to agents.
✅ Query Letter - Up to 2 pages
✅ Synopsis - Up to 2 pages
✅ First 10 pages of your book
All submitted materials must follow industry-standard formatting: 12-point Times New Roman, double-spaced, 1-inch margins.
You’ll get targeted feedback on how each piece supports your pitch and how to revise so they work as a cohesive, compelling stack.
Full Package Price: $499
You’ll receive:
Line edits + margin notes
A detailed editorial letter
Strategic feedback across all 3 submission materials
This is your full query submission package reviewed by an expert.
Need help with just your query letter and synopsis?
Why It Works
✅ Trusted by writers prepping for agent submission.
✅ Designed to help you avoid rejections that come from weak query submission materials.
✅ Grounded in what agents actually want to see.
✅ Designed to reflect what agents are actually looking for so you can query with confidence.
✅ Tailored feedback that saves you months of second guessing.
✅ Honest and strategic feedback
Who It’s For / Not For
This critique is for you if…
✔️ You’re preparing to query agents and want your submission to actually land.
✔️ You’ve written a query and synopsis, and edited your opening pages, but you’re not sure they’re working.
✔️ You want honest, strategic feedback that goes beyond vague advice.
✔️ You’ve gotten form rejections and need to know what’s holding your submission back.
✔️ You’re ready to revise and improve your query materials but need direction.
✔️ You want your query materials to work together as a powerful pitch.
This is not for you if…
❌ You haven’t written your query letter or synopsis yet
❌ You’re looking for full-on rewriting.
❌ You want a quick fix but aren’t open to revising.
How It Works
Book your critique ($499) using the checkout form below. One payment. No hidden fees.
Immediately after booking, you’ll receive a welcome email confirming your critique request.
Within 24 hours, you’ll receive another email with your private client portal link
Upload your query letter and synopsis (up to 2 pages each) to the client portal.
Upload the first 10 pages of your book to the client portal.
Receive detailed feedback within 3 -4 weeks.
Frequently Asked Questions
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The service includes detailed feedback on your:
Query Letter (up to 2 pages)
Synopsis (up to 2 pages)
First 10 pages of your manuscript
This service covers one round of feedback only.
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Once you upload your materials, you’ll receive your critique within 3 - 4 weeks.
I don’t rush the process. I take the time to deliver thoughtful, actionable feedback.
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You can submit your materials as .doc, .docx, or Google Docs.
Just make sure sharing permissions are set correctly if you’re using Google Drive.
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All your submitted materials must follow industry-standard formatting:
12 point Times New Roman, double-spaced, 1-inch margins.
This ensues the critique reflects how agents will read your work and keeps the page count fair for all writers.
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No. This is a critique, not a rewrite. But I’ll give you line-level comments, strategic insights, and specific revision guidance.
You’ll do the rewriting to keep the voice yours.
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Yes! But you’ll need to upload your materials within 10 days of purchase to reserve your critique spot.
After that, your booking may be forfeited. If something comes up, just email me and we’ll work it out.
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Due to the time-intensive nature of this critique, all sales are final once your files are uploaded.
If you haven’t uploaded your materials within 10 days, your booking is forfeited. Please reach out to us for an extension if you need more time.
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Not ready for a full submission critique?
Whether you’re polishing your query and synopsis or refining your first pages, every part your submission deserves to be reviewed with a strategic lens.
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