Make your query impossible to ignore.
Get a professional query letter & synopsis critique to sharpen your query and land full requests.
In-depth feedback in 2-3 weeks.
$299 One-time payment.
Includes your query & synopsis (up to 2 pages each).
No hidden fees. 2-3 weeks turnaround.Why your query letter & synopsis deserve a second set of expert eyes.
✅ Stand out in the agent slush pile in 15 seconds or less.
✅ Tighten your hook, stakes, and genre signal.
✅ Fix red flags before agents spot them.
✅ Get direct, line-level feedback.
What’s Included with Your Query & Synopsis Critique?
✔️ A 1-page editorial letter covering:
Strengths and red flags in your materials
Suggestions for language, structure, voice
Tips on trimming, polishing, or rephrasing key areas
✔️ Line level comments on your query letter & synopsis (up to 2 pages each)
✔️ 2 - 3 weeks turnaround from the date materials are received.
How much does it cost?
Just $299 for expert level feedback on both your query and synopsis.
You’ll get personalized line edits, a strategic summary, and guidance you can trust. All within 2-3 weeks.
Need help with your opening pages, not just your query letter and synopsis?
Who It’s For / Not For
This is for you if…
✔️ You’re about to query.
✔️ You’ve been getting rejections.
✔️ You want submission-ready materials.
This is not for you if…
❌ You haven’t written your query letter.
❌ You want a full rewrite.
❌ You need a full manuscript critique.
How It Works:
Query + Synopsis Feedback in 2-3 Weeks
Book your Query & Synopsis Critique using the checkout form below.
Immediately after booking, you’ll receive a welcome email confirming your critique request.
Within 24 hours, you’ll receive another email with your private client portal link
Upload your query letter (up to 2 pages) to the client portal.
Upload your synopsis (up to 2 pages) to the client portal.
Receive detailed feedback within 2 -3 weeks.
This query & synopsis critique is $299, an affordable step toward a stronger query submission.
Your book deserves to make it past the slush pile.
Let’s make it happen.
Frequently Asked Questions
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Once you upload your materials, you’ll receive your critique within 2 - 3 weeks.
I don’t rush the process. I take the time to deliver thoughtful, actionable feedback.
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You can submit your materials as .doc, .docx, or Google Docs.
Just make sure sharing permissions are set correctly if you’re using Google Drive.
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No. All your materials must follow industry-standard formatting:
12 point Times New Roman, double-spaced, 1-inch margins.
This ensues the critique reflects how agents will read your work and keeps the page count fair for all writers.
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No. I don’t rewrite. But I’ll help you revise strategically with clear line edits, structure notes, and guidance to make them stronger.
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Yes! But you’ll need to upload your materials within 10 days of purchase to reserve your critique spot.
After that, your booking may be forfeited. If something comes up, just email me and we’ll work it out.
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Due to the time-intensive nature of this critique, all sales are final once your files are uploaded.
If you haven’t uploaded your materials within 10 days, your booking is forfeited. Please reach out to us for an extension if you need more time.
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Want expert eyes on your full submission package, not only your query and synopsis?
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