Draft Diagnostic
You send 20–30K words of your work-in-progress and a summary of what the story is about or where you feel stuck. I assess the big-picture trajectory and diagnose what’s working, what’s breaking down, and why.
This service is ideal for:
Writers who are losing momentum mid-draft
Projects that feel messy or off-track
Anyone unsure if the draft still reflects the original story vision
You'll receive a 3–5 page memo with a revision strategy, clarity checklist, and specific scene-level insights to help you regain focus and finish strong.
You send 20–30K words of your work-in-progress and a summary of what the story is about or where you feel stuck. I assess the big-picture trajectory and diagnose what’s working, what’s breaking down, and why.
This service is ideal for:
Writers who are losing momentum mid-draft
Projects that feel messy or off-track
Anyone unsure if the draft still reflects the original story vision
You'll receive a 3–5 page memo with a revision strategy, clarity checklist, and specific scene-level insights to help you regain focus and finish strong.
You send 20–30K words of your work-in-progress and a summary of what the story is about or where you feel stuck. I assess the big-picture trajectory and diagnose what’s working, what’s breaking down, and why.
This service is ideal for:
Writers who are losing momentum mid-draft
Projects that feel messy or off-track
Anyone unsure if the draft still reflects the original story vision
You'll receive a 3–5 page memo with a revision strategy, clarity checklist, and specific scene-level insights to help you regain focus and finish strong.